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Final Tear

Author Otoada9
Post at: Sunday, September 30, 2007 - 5:12 PM
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This is not a lyric song that all most readers think, this is not a story, not a poetry... I dont know but wonder if it can be sung in someone's soul...

 SEE

YOUR TEAR

FIX

YOUR HEART

Keep crying, cry a lot.

Let me see your tears.

Someday, if you go to another world, nobody will ever know that you have cried…. Forever

But please let me know, that’s our secret.

When you want to cry, let me come and cry with you and nobody will know that we have cried.

That’s our secret.When I am no longer at your side, please don't cry alone… for they'll know that we have cried.

When you want to cry with me, you can lie down close your eyes…we will cry together in your own world.  

Someday you see me in your dream with a tear

That’s my final tear.  Wish you’ll shed a final tear too. Please promise…that is your final tear.

And someday…. There isn’t someone can cry with you anymore

The infinite universe is looking for the final tear….

(If I gone...I'll come to your dream and you only cry with me that is the final tear..........)
(Otoada 2006 - version 1)

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vivi(anonymous)
The infinite universe is looking for the final tear….

in the infinite universe , we are looking for the one who can cry together.

before that we are the only one in the infinite universe.only the shadow will with you for ever.
we looking for the voice, that we speak out long long ago.
it is an unberable pity for the suffering of mankind.

Post time Monday, November 01, 2010 - 11:24 PM


carlosride(anonymous)
hello its me carlos ride,

i would like to cry with you oto , cuz you know why? i feel the same as you feel, sometimes i came to a realization that you can never be happy always its nice to cry sometimes, it makes you feel reborn, and after you cry you smile. i use to cry then smile later .. it my nature i think,,,,


thanks

Post time Friday, October 12, 2007 - 4:29 PM


PinkyRain
It's a nice and touching entry!
Yes, we need someone who is willing to cry, not just to smile with us .

Post time Monday, October 01, 2007 - 9:14 PM



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